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DeviantART and Wacom are proud to present the second Intuos4 "Bring Your Vision To Life" contest! Open to all artists all over the world, we challenge you to show us your dreams and aspirations for the future. Get drawing!
Artist's CommentsSomewhere in space, there was a very advanced race called "Travellers" that even reached the space. In their system was only one planet and it had one moon. But the exploration of space brought also some negative things. They founded even more advanced race than they are. They races made an nonaggression pact but our second race has turned traitor and almost defeated Traveller race on planet. But what they didn't know about was the fact that Travellers also colonised their moon and then developed the moon shield ,superweapon and interstellar drive drawing energy from the core. Then they rached homeworld of the traitor race and now they are using their superweapon to take vengeance on them. The rest can you see on the image  Technical parameters:  6000x4000 (without borders) about two weeks of workPSD file size reaching one gigabyte Photoshop CS4, Cinema 4D, VueWallpaperpack available! Standard  1024x7681280x10241600x12002048x1536Widescreen 16:10 1280x8001680x10501920x1200Widescreen 16:9 (Have special borders )1366x7681920x1080 FullHDComments & Critiques & Faves are welcome  Comments
 No nevim co k tomu napsat. Mám trochu smíšenej pocit. Určitě bych pochválil ná
 aditost. Asi jsem tady tohle neviděl. Paprsky vysílaný z planety. Supr je textura planet(hlavně ta malá ve předu) a celkově provedení.Ale proboha proč je to tak přeplácaný. Vždyť tam neni kousek prázdnýho místa. Dokonce loď i přes meteority Ale nelíbí se mi tam toho víc. Zaprvý nebuly jsou na tebe dost š atný asi už si neměl čas. Vypadá to spíš jak hory. Pak je divný jak vidět zkrz černý pruhy. Malá planeta nahoře má divnej stín a působí dost ploše. Ale nejhorší mi přijde faakt ta kompozice. Tyjo, to vůbec není š
atný, např. ty šutry jsou super. A ta planeta co zrovna útočí na tu velkou vypadá super . Co se mi ale nelíbí je ten výbuch na velké planetě a taky slunce vypadá jako by ho prokousávali svítící červy  . Je vidět, že jsis dal fakt záležet.Pěkný příběh Zkusim s tim ještě do zítřka udělat co se dá. A s tou malou planetou máš pradvu - je placatá, ale to se dá jednoduše spravit. Loď dám pryč, původně sem chtěl udělat nejakou bitvu, ale to mi nedopřál můj největší nepřítel - čas, a tak sem chtěl toho modelu lodi prostě nějak využít. Protuberance na hvězdě(červy
) dám asi taky pryč. Jinak co se týče nebul tak je to moje slabé místo v SA a myslím si že to je zatím nejlepší co jsem ze sebe dokázal vymáčknout (No dobře druhé, dle mého názoru nejpovedenější nebulu si schovávám ještě na disku v jednom nedokončeném SA). Díky za kritiku. P.S.: Můžu se jen zeptat co myslíš tím "Pak je divný jak vidět zkrz černý pruhy" nejak jsem to nepochopil k čemu se to vztahuje -- Instead of we say that the universe was created and that it will maybe once extinguished, we should only say: the universe is. My newest SA: [link] Hidden by Owner Hidden by Owner Díky. Abych pravdu řekl, ten výbuch se nelíbí ani mě, ale nevím prostě jak to udělat aby to vypadalo trochu reálně. "Červy" dám asi taky pryč, uvidíme co z toho ještě zítra vyleze
. Díky za ocenění příběhu a jestli tam mám nějakou závažnou chybu v angličtině tak mi pls řekni ať to můžu opravit -- Instead of we say that the universe was created and that it will maybe once extinguished, we should only say: the universe is. My newest SA: [link] Nemáš zač
...  , to se ptáš toho pravého, jestli tam máš nějakou chybu, já jsem němčinář (nevím jak mě taká blbost mohla napadnout... učit se němčinu), každopádně se to snažím dohnat překládáním textů, no a taky vlasně 2 roky chodím do kurzu angličtiny, ale moc toho z tama nevím . Very cool. Added to "Devious" Collection here [link]
-- "Isaac Asimov " "Life is pleasant. Death is peaceful. It's the transition that's troublesome"  strašný psycho
líbí se mi to až na ten dopad laseru na planetě... ten oheň (vybuch, nebo co to vlastně je) je slabej... chtělo by ho zduraznit... |
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Critiques
It's obvious this is probably the best piece you've done so far. Although - nothing is perfect. I'll get back to it later, first - the highlights.
This piece has that beautiful classic SA feeling (except it's not hand made). At first glance I wouldn't even recognize all the other 3D aspects. Original sci-fi idea only supports this classical mood when all the Space Art artists were not influenced by science and their imagination had no boundaries.
Color mood is laso one of the highlights - no big contrast, but calm, soft colors that don't distract from details.
There are just 2 things that concern me a bit - the first one you already know - it's that composition - not really wrong, but a bit messed up. Too much objects together on small space. Space needs to breathe.. ..it's vast and silent - your is just.. ..crowded.
The other problem is with the overal "plastic" feel when I look a bit closer. Not a really big deal, but I must mention it. Probably caused by that 3D machinery.
Anyway - a good piece in right time. That's the way to go!
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