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Travellers by Scortis Travellers by Scortis

Somewhere in space, there was a very advanced race called "Travellers" that even reached the space.
In their system was only one planet and it had one moon. But the exploration of space brought also some negative things. They found even more advanced race than they are. They races made an nonaggression pact but our second race has turned traitor and almost defeated Traveller race on planet.
But what they didn't know about was the fact that Travellers also colonised their moon and then developed the moon shield ,superweapon and interstellar drive drawing energy from the core.
Then they rached homeworld of the traitor race and now they are using their superweapon to take vengeance on them.

The rest can you see on the image ;)

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:iconjoeyjazz:
First - I'm glad you removed that terrible 3D ship.
It's obvious this is probably the best piece you've done so far. Although - nothing is perfect. I'll get back to it later, first - the highlights.
This piece has that beautiful classic SA feeling (except it's not hand made). At first glance I wouldn't even recognize all the other 3D aspects. Original sci-fi idea only supports this classical mood when all the Space Art artists were not influenced by science and their imagination had no boundaries.
Color mood is laso one of the highlights - no big contrast, but calm, soft colors that don't distract from details.
There are just 2 things that concern me a bit - the first one you already know - it's that composition - not really wrong, but a bit messed up. Too much objects together on small space. Space needs to breathe.. ..it's vast and silent - your is just.. ..crowded. :D
The other problem is with the overal "plastic" feel when I look a bit closer. Not a really big deal, but I must mention it. Probably caused by that 3D machinery.
Anyway - a good piece in right time. That's the way to go!
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tsumefan2 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
sounds like the new game that's coming out called destiny by bungie....
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:iconxzendor7:
xzendor7 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012   Digital Artist
Very Cool.
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:iconscortis:
Scortis Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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:iconrizarlogic:
RizarLogic Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
Featured - Varieties of SF Experience | [link]
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:iconscortis:
Scortis Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I haven't been here for a long time, so I'm responding very late. Thank you very much :).
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danarogon Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Am I not seeing this correctly? Am I blind? Cuss why did this pic won? i mean no offence dude congratz for winning and all but i don't find this that good :/ the lighting look very strange... it seems there is no prespective here... i find this a starter work. and not a work that should be the winner for the contest! i have seen other great works in this contest... but i don't find yours that whorty :/
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:iconscortis:
Scortis Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's also the opinion. I was also very surprised I won. Judges probably liked an idea or dunno. I know of the messed perspective etc. but I did this work in my 16 :D
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:iconinnovari:
innovari Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
An amazing andcreative work! BRAVO!
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:iconrizarlogic:
RizarLogic Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011
It's a classic story of hubris. It's probably more likely that the two species evolved from a similar original lifeform to account for their relative closeness of advancement. Really great work!
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:icondocgoodcrazy:
docgoodcrazy Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010
Just keep on traveling...
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:iconwaneblade:
WaneBlade Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010
That'd be cool if we here on Earth had that! ...but then again, what the heck.
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:iconp-ns3:
P-ns3 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010
GUESS WHAT I FOUND A HEART IN THIS PIC
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:iconscortis:
Scortis Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Dunno, most of people like idea ;)
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:iconp-ns3:
P-ns3 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
i donno what yur talkin' about, but i saw the heart down at the bottom of the pic where it merors idk how to spell word
and the idea is a good one
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:iconscortis:
Scortis Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Probably know what do you think - the asteroid by the text and its reflection. You're right looks like heart but it wasn't planned and i noticed that once when you told it to me ;) (on my own art :D). Thank you for comment
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:iconp-ns3:
P-ns3 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2010
your welcome
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:iconprincejulian:
princejulian Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2010  Student Artist
reminds me of the Death Star =P
very nice picture, and congrats!
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:iconsubedei:
subedei Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
Excellent work well done
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:iconqauz:
QAuZ Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009
featured [link]
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:iconscortis:
Scortis Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Thx
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:iconqauz:
QAuZ Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010
NP!
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:iconhylanvahr:
Hylanvahr Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Congrats on winning the contest! It was truly well-earned. And yes, revenge is effing sweet!
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:iconfreeform---creations:
FreeForm---Creations Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009   Interface Designer
Are You Serious This Was A gigabyte?!?!?!?!?!?!
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Slayer3915 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2009
What an incredible image.
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:iconmegaclaw2:
megaclaw2 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2009
wouldn't it cause allot of problems on their home planet to move their moon?
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:iconjoeyjazz:
JoeyJazz Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah, they would probably lose their tidal waves and such :D
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:iconenzudes1gn:
EnzuDes1gn Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
lovely entry, and many congratulations on the WIN :)
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:iconspani5h:
spani5h Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
congratz for winning, really good peace :)
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priteeboy Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And all this time the race on theplanet didn't notice anything going on on their moon? :clueless: ahh well, that aside - this is a new concept and well executed too, congrats on winning :winner:
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Scortis Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2009  Student Digital Artist
This race just killed all the population on the planet of Travellers, nothing more. Their homeworld was on other place in galaxy, so they couldn't know what the Travellers are doing ;)

Thank you for comment
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:iconwarsie:
Warsie Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
HAHAHA back-stabbing motherfuckers got pwned. I like the structure of that superweapon on the moon.
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:iconscortis:
Scortis Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009  Student Digital Artist
THX
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:iconwarsie:
Warsie Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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:iconjoeyjazz:
JoeyJazz Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Líbí - klasická tradiční sci-fi malba... ...akorát dělaná v PS a né na plátnu (i se všemi patřičnými neduhy).
Snad jen ta šílená 3D loď.


A ty 2 lodě... ...že sem s nima kdy vůbec začínal :D
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Scortis Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Díky moc. Tu šílenou loď dám pryč, dneska ještě udělám edit. A díky za :+fav:
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phoenixerCZ Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009  Student Photographer
strašný psycho :D líbí se mi to až na ten dopad laseru na planetě... ten oheň (vybuch, nebo co to vlastně je) je slabej... chtělo by ho zduraznit...
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:iconbillndrsn:
billndrsn Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Very cool. Added to "Devious" Collection here [link]
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:iconpaul-cz:
paul-cz Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Tyjo, to vůbec není š;patný, např. ty šutry jsou super. A ta planeta co zrovna útočí na tu velkou vypadá super :). Co se mi ale nelíbí je ten výbuch na velké planetě a taky slunce vypadá jako by ho prokousávali svítící červy =p. Je vidět, že jsis dal fakt záležet.
Pěkný příběh :)
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:iconscortis:
Scortis Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Díky. Abych pravdu řekl, ten výbuch se nelíbí ani mě, ale nevím prostě jak to udělat aby to vypadalo trochu reálně. "Červy" dám asi taky pryč, uvidíme co z toho ještě zítra vyleze ;). Díky za ocenění příběhu a jestli tam mám nějakou závažnou chybu v angličtině tak mi pls řekni ať to můžu opravit ;)
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paul-cz Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nemáš zač :)
... :D, to se ptáš toho pravého, jestli tam máš nějakou chybu, já jsem němčinář (nevím jak mě taká blbost mohla napadnout... učit se němčinu), každopádně se to snažím dohnat překládáním textů, no a taky vlasně 2 roky chodím do kurzu angličtiny, ale moc toho z tama nevím :).
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FugasCZ Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No nevim co k tomu napsat. Mám trochu smíšenej pocit. Určitě bych pochválil ná;paditost. Asi jsem tady tohle neviděl. Paprsky vysílaný z planety. Supr je textura planet(hlavně ta malá ve předu) a celkově provedení.
Ale proboha proč je to tak přeplácaný. Vždyť tam neni kousek prázdnýho místa. Dokonce loď i přes meteority
Ale nelíbí se mi tam toho víc. Zaprvý nebuly jsou na tebe dost š;patný asi už si neměl čas. Vypadá to spíš jak hory. Pak je divný jak vidět zkrz černý pruhy. Malá planeta nahoře má divnej stín a působí dost ploše. Ale nejhorší mi přijde faakt ta kompozice.
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Scortis Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Zkusim s tim ještě do zítřka udělat co se dá. A s tou malou planetou máš pradvu - je placatá, ale to se dá jednoduše spravit. Loď dám pryč, původně sem chtěl udělat nejakou bitvu, ale to mi nedopřál můj největší nepřítel - čas, a tak sem chtěl toho modelu lodi prostě nějak využít. Protuberance na hvězdě(červy ;)) dám asi taky pryč. Jinak co se týče nebul tak je to moje slabé místo v SA a myslím si že to je zatím nejlepší co jsem ze sebe dokázal vymáčknout (No dobře druhé, dle mého názoru nejpovedenější nebulu si schovávám ještě na disku v jednom nedokončeném SA). Díky za kritiku.

P.S.: Můžu se jen zeptat co myslíš tím "Pak je divný jak vidět zkrz černý pruhy" nejak jsem to nepochopil k čemu se to vztahuje
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FugasCZ Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Myslel jsem ty pruhy co jsou po stranách, nahoře a dole. Já je dělám ú;plně černý, aby nebylo skrz vidět. Tohle se mi moc nelíbí. Ale je to věc názoru.
Ty nebuly nejsou š;patný. Jen jsou do blbýho tvaru. Na ostatních dílech to máš hezky zakomponovaný. Jako oblaka v ploše.
Jinak napsal jsem to trochu tvrdě. Myslím, že technicky jsi na tom dobře, ale hrozně to přeplácáš a to je škoda. V tomhle díle je snad vše, co jde v SA udělat(lodě v dálce, jedna ve předu, planety paprsek, výbuch na planetě, slunce, meteority, osídlení na planetě;)chybí snad jen "gas gigant". Působí to na mně jak tutoriál/ukázka toho co všechno umíš. Koukni na díla Jesuse a dalších dobrejch SAartistů. Maj tam o hodně víc volnosti.
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